I like the build in the first four stanzas, but it feels like you're missing something between four and five."Zilla zee zo zora", perhaps?
.I get the same feeling, and your solution would solve the problem. Ergo, Zilly zee zeeToodee, toodeeZilly zee zeeToodaaaaaZilly zee zeeToodee toodeeZilly zee zeeTaadooooZilla zee zo zoraZillyZillyZilly zee zee
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I like the build in the first four stanzas, but it feels like you're missing something between four and five.
ReplyDelete"Zilla zee zo zora", perhaps?
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ReplyDeleteI get the same feeling, and your solution would solve the problem. Ergo,
Zilly zee zee
Toodee, toodee
Zilly zee zee
Toodaaaaa
Zilly zee zee
Toodee toodee
Zilly zee zee
Taadoooo
Zilla zee zo zora
Zilly
Zilly
Zilly zee zee