2007-04-19

Zilly zee zee

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Zilly zee zee
Toodee, toodee

Zilly zee zee
Toodaaaaa

Zilly zee zee
Toodee toodee

Zilly zee zee
Taadoooo

Zilly
Zilly
Zilly zee zee

2 comments:

  1. I like the build in the first four stanzas, but it feels like you're missing something between four and five.

    "Zilla zee zo zora", perhaps?

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  2. .

    I get the same feeling, and your solution would solve the problem. Ergo,

    Zilly zee zee
    Toodee, toodee

    Zilly zee zee
    Toodaaaaa

    Zilly zee zee
    Toodee toodee

    Zilly zee zee
    Taadoooo

    Zilla zee zo zora

    Zilly
    Zilly
    Zilly zee zee

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